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Like a wave, You crash over me, Open my eyes with, The calm of the sea. Like a book, Your pages read clear, Sentences true, Chapters sincere. Like a wagon, You carry the weight, Of love, hold it up, As your wheels rotate. Like a compass, I use you to guide, My direction I let you decide.
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Jan 29, 2018
Jan 29, 2018 at 4:53 PM UTC
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Like a wave, You crash over me, Open my eyes with, The calm of the sea. Like a book, Your pages read clear, Sentences true, Chapters sincere. Like a wagon, You carry the weight, Of love, hold it up, As your wheels rotate. Like a compass, I use you to guide, My direction I let you decide.
Another old one I edited. Much better now. I would love any critique or compliments.
AmandaKayBurke
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30/F/Alaska
Jan 29, 2018
Jan 29, 2018 at 4:53 PM UTC
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