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A piece of green bottle glass smoothed by restless oceans seed pod from the horsechestnut that shaded summer garden sixpence stained by christmas pudding dated 1928 a tiny fossil set in stone rough to the touch of fingers old lace from grandmothers wedding dress now stiff and yellowed parchment
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Sep 10, 2012
Sep 10, 2012 at 5:24 PM UTC
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A piece of green bottle glass smoothed by restless oceans seed pod from the horsechestnut that shaded summer garden sixpence stained by christmas pudding dated 1928 a tiny fossil set in stone rough to the touch of fingers old lace from grandmothers wedding dress now stiff and yellowed parchment
This has 2 lines missing at the end I feel any suggestions? It doesn't feel rounded off when read
eileen-prunster
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Sep 10, 2012
Sep 10, 2012 at 5:24 PM UTC
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