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grotesque old Tomon-go in that corner he holds in the market he looks angry, fierce and his open mouth inside as red as the feet of a fighting **** Ah, his words fly like arrows helter-skelter some miss, some strike – he does not know what missiles he sends, what he throws and in turn anything he receives he throws back with quadrupled energy *He looks fierce, he looks mean all relatives say in hushed tones - but he’s really nice, a softie with a hard exterior* at the market his face is convoluted there are a hundred writhing beings that make up his countenance (each a contortionist) the energy of the practised old grumpy men live in his hands and he unleashes words that make everyone recall the last tsunami *He looks fierce, he looks mean all the women and men in the market say in whispers - but he’s really nice, a softie with a hard exterior* Ah, poor Tomon-go, his words and manner isolate him he hurts others and is hurt in turn Poor Tomon-go, poor all who come in contact with him though they might whisper to one another: *He looks fierce, he looks mean but he’s really nice, a softie with a sharp tongue and grotesque exterior*
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Sep 9, 2012
Sep 9, 2012 at 5:14 AM UTC
fierce-look Tomon-go
grotesque old Tomon-go in that corner he holds in the market he looks angry, fierce and his open mouth inside as red as the feet of a fighting **** Ah, his words fly like arrows helter-skelter some miss, some strike – he does not know what missiles he sends, what he throws and in turn anything he receives he throws back with quadrupled energy *He looks fierce, he looks mean all relatives say in hushed tones - but he’s really nice, a softie with a hard exterior* at the market his face is convoluted there are a hundred writhing beings that make up his countenance (each a contortionist) the energy of the practised old grumpy men live in his hands and he unleashes words that make everyone recall the last tsunami *He looks fierce, he looks mean all the women and men in the market say in whispers - but he’s really nice, a softie with a hard exterior* Ah, poor Tomon-go, his words and manner isolate him he hurts others and is hurt in turn Poor Tomon-go, poor all who come in contact with him though they might whisper to one another: *He looks fierce, he looks mean but he’s really nice, a softie with a sharp tongue and grotesque exterior*
based on caricature art by Utagawa Kuniyoshi (歌川 国芳?, January 1, 1797[1] - April 14, 1862
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Sep 9, 2012
Sep 9, 2012 at 5:14 AM UTC
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