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They tell me I write okayish. I smile and greet them as the sun greets the minarets in the desert, without a purpose. Why don't you write something on love, they say, something about a terrible broken past, it sells,they love it. they relate to it. I tell him, I don't get the vibes out of it, love sometimes feels like eating leftover chips at a mediocre burger joint. I prefer watching dogs playing in the rain. atleast they never pretend.
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Jan 22, 2018
Jan 22, 2018 at 5:34 AM UTC
Love
They tell me I write okayish. I smile and greet them as the sun greets the minarets in the desert, without a purpose. Why don't you write something on love, they say, something about a terrible broken past, it sells,they love it. they relate to it. I tell him, I don't get the vibes out of it, love sometimes feels like eating leftover chips at a mediocre burger joint. I prefer watching dogs playing in the rain. atleast they never pretend.
shashank-bhardwaj
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Jan 22, 2018
Jan 22, 2018 at 5:34 AM UTC
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