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I found you hiding in your painting I distinctly remember saying that you reminded me of Monet Beautiful without trying           Elegant Simplicity You said I was like Seurat Up close a jumble of emotions and thoughts that seemed to contrast, but then all made sense when you took me in as a whole That night, we drank our fill we danced under the fresco moonlight    Our colors bled together as our lines, boundaries, and vision blurred Perfect Chaos.  Dali would have approved. But..your lips. Those perfect lips dripping in crimson red oil contrasting pastel skin remained crisp and vivid in my memories They left their mark on my canvas A smile beckoning, drawing me That night, so long ago... We painted a masterpiece
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Sep 6, 2012
Sep 6, 2012 at 10:55 PM UTC
Masterpiece
I found you hiding in your painting I distinctly remember saying that you reminded me of Monet Beautiful without trying           Elegant Simplicity You said I was like Seurat Up close a jumble of emotions and thoughts that seemed to contrast, but then all made sense when you took me in as a whole That night, we drank our fill we danced under the fresco moonlight    Our colors bled together as our lines, boundaries, and vision blurred Perfect Chaos.  Dali would have approved. But..your lips. Those perfect lips dripping in crimson red oil contrasting pastel skin remained crisp and vivid in my memories They left their mark on my canvas A smile beckoning, drawing me That night, so long ago... We painted a masterpiece
j-a-doetsch
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40/M/American
Sep 6, 2012
Sep 6, 2012 at 10:55 PM UTC
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