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Those are Bullfinch’s eggs Jane said pointing at the 5 eggs in a nest hidden in a hedge and as she pointed you imagined that some god modelled all female fingers on that before you how the nail was set so perfectly on the finger’s tip the colour pinkish white the skin almost blending in we mustn’t disturb she added or the mother bird will fly away and not return oh right you said gazing at the eggs once her finger had been removed from the hedge you studied the pale blue eggs speckled there and sensed her presence near your cheek the lavender that she wore the way her hair dark coming to her shoulders was tied back from her face some collect them Jane said and pierce the top and bottom and blow through the contents and have them on display do they? you said seeing the sad expression she wore why is that? you asked she stood back from the hedgerow and looking at you with her dark eyes said because they must have they have to collect what is there for all to see they must just have for themselves alone the May sun was shining warm and she took your hand in hers and walked you on along the lane the small stream running by the lane’s edge her grey skirt and white blouse and white socks giving her a plain look but her eyes lit up and she smiled again and you wanted at that moment as she held your hand for that hour to be there forever not to be lost thinking you knew then the depth of love and not its loss of that and feeling sense and not the cost.
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Sep 5, 2012
Sep 5, 2012 at 3:17 AM UTC
JANE AND BULLFINCH EGGS.
Those are Bullfinch’s eggs Jane said pointing at the 5 eggs in a nest hidden in a hedge and as she pointed you imagined that some god modelled all female fingers on that before you how the nail was set so perfectly on the finger’s tip the colour pinkish white the skin almost blending in we mustn’t disturb she added or the mother bird will fly away and not return oh right you said gazing at the eggs once her finger had been removed from the hedge you studied the pale blue eggs speckled there and sensed her presence near your cheek the lavender that she wore the way her hair dark coming to her shoulders was tied back from her face some collect them Jane said and pierce the top and bottom and blow through the contents and have them on display do they? you said seeing the sad expression she wore why is that? you asked she stood back from the hedgerow and looking at you with her dark eyes said because they must have they have to collect what is there for all to see they must just have for themselves alone the May sun was shining warm and she took your hand in hers and walked you on along the lane the small stream running by the lane’s edge her grey skirt and white blouse and white socks giving her a plain look but her eyes lit up and she smiled again and you wanted at that moment as she held your hand for that hour to be there forever not to be lost thinking you knew then the depth of love and not its loss of that and feeling sense and not the cost.
BOY AND GIRL AND BULLFINCH EGGS IN 1961.
terry-collett
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Sep 5, 2012
Sep 5, 2012 at 3:17 AM UTC
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