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[My beloved Mum died 2 years ago today.] (sonnet #MMMMMMDCCCLXXVI) This wan light draws up shadows for pretense, Their fragile shapes like ghosts in sheer betrayl Upon dry lanes bleached ere for safety, pale Blue skies with half an eye, winds piercing thence Nor but too bitter as they scour from hence The frore and stubbled fields none wander; frail And icy clouds with grey battalions hail Is't who'd observe in passing?, like's good sense. I cherish naked trees' black forms in tour, Now clustered by the graveyard, tombstones to Effect 'non dotting hallowed ground is't? poor As our fond notions, dim hours' greyer cue Sae perfect as Death owns that space as twere, While leering at souls through these minutes too. 12Jan18a
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Jan 15, 2018
Jan 15, 2018 at 11:41 PM UTC
Yo, What WERE You Thinking, Eh?
[My beloved Mum died 2 years ago today.] (sonnet #MMMMMMDCCCLXXVI) This wan light draws up shadows for pretense, Their fragile shapes like ghosts in sheer betrayl Upon dry lanes bleached ere for safety, pale Blue skies with half an eye, winds piercing thence Nor but too bitter as they scour from hence The frore and stubbled fields none wander; frail And icy clouds with grey battalions hail Is't who'd observe in passing?, like's good sense. I cherish naked trees' black forms in tour, Now clustered by the graveyard, tombstones to Effect 'non dotting hallowed ground is't? poor As our fond notions, dim hours' greyer cue Sae perfect as Death owns that space as twere, While leering at souls through these minutes too. 12Jan18a
NOTE: L's 7-8, coming down the slope to the intersection and sitting at the light, I don't know why those fluffy grey clouds against the icier white in blue skies struck me suddenly as a vision of enemy aircraft coming in for a raid over the masses of houses sprawling across from left to right.
JennyGordon
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51/F/Bolingbrook, IL
Jan 15, 2018
Jan 15, 2018 at 11:41 PM UTC
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