Eyes - 1st Haiku - Hello Poetry

I'm a prisoner, Drowning in their temptation, Eyes of chocolate daze.

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Jan 8, 2018

Jan 8, 2018 at 3:48 AM UTC

Eyes - 1st Haiku

I'm a prisoner, Drowning in their temptation, Eyes of chocolate daze.

This is my first attempt at a Haiku. Is it correct? Would love to hear some feed back on this

#haiku #eyes #beauty

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27/M/Bahrain

Jan 8, 2018

Jan 8, 2018 at 3:48 AM UTC

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