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I thought I knew everything there is to know about love. Like a peaceful dove. I just had my heart broken. My mind keep saying I told you so. I remained forsaken. My heart said who said so. I tried to go steady with someone. Look  where that has put me in. I remained one. Should I just give in. I remained reminiscing repeatedly. This happened unexpectedly. Did I just fall out of love? Well technically I fell in love. So I did fall out of love. Because in the first place I fell in love. Or was it puppy love? My friend once said there is no such thing as love at first sight. We just  fight to get to the light. We experience fatal attraction. Through brain composition. So sometimes I act as a distraction. There is a slogan that says “make love not war.” So are you prepared to eat love raw. There's also a poem that says“A BROKEN HEART STILL BEATS”. My favorite part goes like this“a heavily corroded and scared vessel, rendered weak and fragile by the fall from the careless hands before being left to die on the frozen ground ”. This explain the feeling in my heart. I used to say to her don't listen to the community. Because they will makes us miss this opportunity. But I guess I should have listened to my mind and friends. Bcz you never cared in the first place. Now you left me trying to pick up the pieces that you left in. A spoken word can never be returned. But it shall make change. Bcz this pain can never be turned. Maybe for you I wasn't in range. Maybe the person that said love is blind was right. Because I never saw this coming. But I shall remember this by my all might. My heart's blood is raining. So is this the beginning or ending? In my heart you will remain unforgiven. But you can change it if you driven To. So like Alicia Keys. I am going try sleeping with a broken heart. Because now I have no one love. #By Server
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Sep 23, 2018
Sep 23, 2018 at 8:48 AM UTC
TEARS OF LOVE
I thought I knew everything there is to know about love. Like a peaceful dove. I just had my heart broken. My mind keep saying I told you so. I remained forsaken. My heart said who said so. I tried to go steady with someone. Look  where that has put me in. I remained one. Should I just give in. I remained reminiscing repeatedly. This happened unexpectedly. Did I just fall out of love? Well technically I fell in love. So I did fall out of love. Because in the first place I fell in love. Or was it puppy love? My friend once said there is no such thing as love at first sight. We just  fight to get to the light. We experience fatal attraction. Through brain composition. So sometimes I act as a distraction. There is a slogan that says “make love not war.” So are you prepared to eat love raw. There's also a poem that says“A BROKEN HEART STILL BEATS”. My favorite part goes like this“a heavily corroded and scared vessel, rendered weak and fragile by the fall from the careless hands before being left to die on the frozen ground ”. This explain the feeling in my heart. I used to say to her don't listen to the community. Because they will makes us miss this opportunity. But I guess I should have listened to my mind and friends. Bcz you never cared in the first place. Now you left me trying to pick up the pieces that you left in. A spoken word can never be returned. But it shall make change. Bcz this pain can never be turned. Maybe for you I wasn't in range. Maybe the person that said love is blind was right. Because I never saw this coming. But I shall remember this by my all might. My heart's blood is raining. So is this the beginning or ending? In my heart you will remain unforgiven. But you can change it if you driven To. So like Alicia Keys. I am going try sleeping with a broken heart. Because now I have no one love. #By Server
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19/M/Eastern Cape
Sep 23, 2018
Sep 23, 2018 at 8:48 AM UTC
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