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The weight of the night is starting to settle on my shoulders and everything is heavy and everything is breaking And I’m honestly lying on the open carpet Shifting between positions where I might not get sick From a hangover of tears and sinking realizations And my body aches badly where you pinched me too hard Yes you’ve drawn some blood and left some scars Yes you wanted too much and you clung too hard But  it’s proof that you played an equal part And that you cared to stop about as terribly much as a brush fire cares about leaving the earth un-charred.
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Aug 28, 2012
Aug 28, 2012 at 4:37 AM UTC
hangover
The weight of the night is starting to settle on my shoulders and everything is heavy and everything is breaking And I’m honestly lying on the open carpet Shifting between positions where I might not get sick From a hangover of tears and sinking realizations And my body aches badly where you pinched me too hard Yes you’ve drawn some blood and left some scars Yes you wanted too much and you clung too hard But  it’s proof that you played an equal part And that you cared to stop about as terribly much as a brush fire cares about leaving the earth un-charred.
08/28/12 An Eagle Creek poem.
subconscious-on-parade
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Aug 28, 2012
Aug 28, 2012 at 4:37 AM UTC
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