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I met a man of the sea down at Cocoa surrounded by Christmas Cheer. He was an old man, one who'd caught many waves then took a break before catching even more. The others were struggling on 1 foot white water with their shortboards and fish. This man though, he caught a few on an old fashioned longboard like what I learned on as a child. I looked at him with awe, at this man who knew the waves and their bobs, and who knew what sort of board to bring. So I talked with him, asked if he caught much. He said not really, the surf is too small for much. I told him of my father, and the one gift he gave me: a love for the sea's art, for surfing. This old man then asked kindly, openly "Would you like to try it out? I'll show you a bit." I thought about refusing, crawling away in shame but I was drawn in by that welcoming man and so I hopped on up, or rather slipped and slid until I perched on top clinging awkwardly. He held the board a bit, telling me to relax, to let my feet hang down at the sides, and getting me to paddle. Which is awkward with a board that size between your arms but I did and I did pushing myself forward. Then he let go and had me paddle out before calling that I was too far because he knew where they came, he knew where I'd catch one. Turning I found easier, though I tipped over a tad before catching myself and always with my ankles gripping onto the rails. I paddled back a bit, back to that kindly old man. He grabbed hold of the board once more and told me to start paddling, just keep paddling. Then it was there, the wave an unmistakable rush of most remarkable force that rockets you forward and rips away control while giving you another sort, so long as you work with it, work with the sea. I turned into it, to the side that hadn't crested to ride along further instead of petering out. Just like he'd taught me, my father's old friend. And though I didn't stand, not wanting to ruin this moment with an awkward failure at a popup, I rode and rode with a growing excitement, a glee like no other until at last I could ride no more for the wave had run out and the land had come up. It was both too short and yet an eternity. Life encapsulated in just one moment. I brought back the board and talked a while longer of how I'd been reborn and he laughed oh so knowingly. "All it takes is one wave, that's how it was for me," he told me as I tread water still awestruck. Never has a truer thing been said to me or to anyone. All it takes is one wave to learn what life is and yet not know it at all. I met a man of the sea down at Cocoa, surrounded by Christmas Cheer, and he taught me to ride along his waves. I met the Man of the Sea and he taught me to live.
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Dec 29, 2017
Dec 29, 2017 at 10:56 PM UTC
Soul Surfing with the Son of the Sea
I met a man of the sea down at Cocoa surrounded by Christmas Cheer. He was an old man, one who'd caught many waves then took a break before catching even more. The others were struggling on 1 foot white water with their shortboards and fish. This man though, he caught a few on an old fashioned longboard like what I learned on as a child. I looked at him with awe, at this man who knew the waves and their bobs, and who knew what sort of board to bring. So I talked with him, asked if he caught much. He said not really, the surf is too small for much. I told him of my father, and the one gift he gave me: a love for the sea's art, for surfing. This old man then asked kindly, openly "Would you like to try it out? I'll show you a bit." I thought about refusing, crawling away in shame but I was drawn in by that welcoming man and so I hopped on up, or rather slipped and slid until I perched on top clinging awkwardly. He held the board a bit, telling me to relax, to let my feet hang down at the sides, and getting me to paddle. Which is awkward with a board that size between your arms but I did and I did pushing myself forward. Then he let go and had me paddle out before calling that I was too far because he knew where they came, he knew where I'd catch one. Turning I found easier, though I tipped over a tad before catching myself and always with my ankles gripping onto the rails. I paddled back a bit, back to that kindly old man. He grabbed hold of the board once more and told me to start paddling, just keep paddling. Then it was there, the wave an unmistakable rush of most remarkable force that rockets you forward and rips away control while giving you another sort, so long as you work with it, work with the sea. I turned into it, to the side that hadn't crested to ride along further instead of petering out. Just like he'd taught me, my father's old friend. And though I didn't stand, not wanting to ruin this moment with an awkward failure at a popup, I rode and rode with a growing excitement, a glee like no other until at last I could ride no more for the wave had run out and the land had come up. It was both too short and yet an eternity. Life encapsulated in just one moment. I brought back the board and talked a while longer of how I'd been reborn and he laughed oh so knowingly. "All it takes is one wave, that's how it was for me," he told me as I tread water still awestruck. Never has a truer thing been said to me or to anyone. All it takes is one wave to learn what life is and yet not know it at all. I met a man of the sea down at Cocoa, surrounded by Christmas Cheer, and he taught me to ride along his waves. I met the Man of the Sea and he taught me to live.
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Dec 29, 2017
Dec 29, 2017 at 10:56 PM UTC
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