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I look upon the devastation it's totality, serene Nothing left for preservation every nook and cranny, clean No vestiges of life no hint of joys or pains An apathy of strife no light within, remains Over analyzed every speck of dust Over critiqued, penalized unable too, adjust To mark a date and time where such a thing occurred Or who would claim the crime the memories now, are blurred I am what I have made of this there is no doubt The reaper has been paid my inward eye, turns out
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Dec 28, 2017
Dec 28, 2017 at 12:42 PM UTC
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I look upon the devastation it's totality, serene Nothing left for preservation every nook and cranny, clean No vestiges of life no hint of joys or pains An apathy of strife no light within, remains Over analyzed every speck of dust Over critiqued, penalized unable too, adjust To mark a date and time where such a thing occurred Or who would claim the crime the memories now, are blurred I am what I have made of this there is no doubt The reaper has been paid my inward eye, turns out
One of my first poems, I'm still tweaking it :D
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Dec 28, 2017
Dec 28, 2017 at 12:42 PM UTC
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