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a simile comparing my love to the explosion of a star as a supernova have you ever seen a star explode? do you know what a supernova feels like? I've never seen a supernova, but I've felt one.  I've fallen in love with the brightest stars and once they disappear, it's only a matter of time before it hits me. First the wind hits me from the outermost layer and I feel it but have no idea what's to come. Then the heat begins to consume me. It's hurting but I've not reached the point of rupture. And once I do my whole body collapses into the heart of a supernova. Watching the star burst into a million pieces all at once as if thinking about your own heart, feeling it do the same. That's what it felt like loving you, you were a supernova that just completely decimated my world.
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Dec 20, 2017
Dec 20, 2017 at 12:21 PM UTC
cosmic love affair
a simile comparing my love to the explosion of a star as a supernova have you ever seen a star explode? do you know what a supernova feels like? I've never seen a supernova, but I've felt one.  I've fallen in love with the brightest stars and once they disappear, it's only a matter of time before it hits me. First the wind hits me from the outermost layer and I feel it but have no idea what's to come. Then the heat begins to consume me. It's hurting but I've not reached the point of rupture. And once I do my whole body collapses into the heart of a supernova. Watching the star burst into a million pieces all at once as if thinking about your own heart, feeling it do the same. That's what it felt like loving you, you were a supernova that just completely decimated my world.
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26/F/Milwaukee, WI
Dec 20, 2017
Dec 20, 2017 at 12:21 PM UTC
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