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Women sit on the laps of drunken men Each man has claimed his ***** Only one man sits alone Nursing a bottle of Jack His eyes downcast and shadowed Are filled with fire and doubt A fire that burns sharp and bitter Much like the liquor in his mouth Woodsmoke covers the sweet smells Of *** and Black and Milds As all fly higher, they care less and less The energy becomes primal and wild Slowly they separate in groups of two Each pair to find a tent of their own The clearing empties, the fire dies down And only one man is left alone
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Aug 19, 2012
Aug 19, 2012 at 11:05 AM UTC
Only One Man Left Alone
Women sit on the laps of drunken men Each man has claimed his ***** Only one man sits alone Nursing a bottle of Jack His eyes downcast and shadowed Are filled with fire and doubt A fire that burns sharp and bitter Much like the liquor in his mouth Woodsmoke covers the sweet smells Of *** and Black and Milds As all fly higher, they care less and less The energy becomes primal and wild Slowly they separate in groups of two Each pair to find a tent of their own The clearing empties, the fire dies down And only one man is left alone
erin-lewis
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Aug 19, 2012
Aug 19, 2012 at 11:05 AM UTC
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