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**Outside the weather is cold Wind blows like a freezer Through the walls it enters It permeates my lonely soul Devoid of whom I love **
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Dec 9, 2017
Dec 9, 2017 at 1:02 AM UTC
Xico
**Outside the weather is cold Wind blows like a freezer Through the walls it enters It permeates my lonely soul Devoid of whom I love **
Another of my 5-5 poems that I call Xicos. 5 words across, 5 lines total. These depict nature, usually in the first 2 sentences, and love, usually the last two sentences. I don't like that second line, mainly because of the word "freezer". I guess you could say I'm going through some heartache, the love type. Some things we can't help, can't we?
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Dec 9, 2017
Dec 9, 2017 at 1:02 AM UTC
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