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My girlfriend posted a picture last fall, I glared, smiled, she looked like a star, I commented, so beautiful.. my eyes were locked. “Twinkle twinkle” I should’ve thought, I worked real hard and banked the pay, my mind was racing from earlier that day, that photo I seen I can’t turn away.. I notice how I forget what to say. I check the post and my comment is gone.. I’m curious because it didn’t feel wrong? I guess that’s when we change the song..... The picture was posted her intentions weren’t focused I liked the picture she posted that day, Unfortunately i noticed it wasn’t for me, That night she glared, didn’t feel right Every word started a fight I’m not jealous but her phone there it laid, I picked it up and the picture had stayed. Active and full, of comments and love, I smiled, I read, the comments turned blank, As I read the comment from him. blank.
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Dec 4, 2017
Dec 4, 2017 at 11:21 PM UTC
Fool me once.
My girlfriend posted a picture last fall, I glared, smiled, she looked like a star, I commented, so beautiful.. my eyes were locked. “Twinkle twinkle” I should’ve thought, I worked real hard and banked the pay, my mind was racing from earlier that day, that photo I seen I can’t turn away.. I notice how I forget what to say. I check the post and my comment is gone.. I’m curious because it didn’t feel wrong? I guess that’s when we change the song..... The picture was posted her intentions weren’t focused I liked the picture she posted that day, Unfortunately i noticed it wasn’t for me, That night she glared, didn’t feel right Every word started a fight I’m not jealous but her phone there it laid, I picked it up and the picture had stayed. Active and full, of comments and love, I smiled, I read, the comments turned blank, As I read the comment from him. blank.
Quick write, not really a great piece of work in my opinion but it speaks volumes to my situation, - finding out that there’s no trust in a relationship, it hurts.
Cyrill
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23/M/Ottawa
Dec 4, 2017
Dec 4, 2017 at 11:21 PM UTC
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