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The white dove has been symbolic of abstract things. I ask it to fly far, put muscle on its wings. Until recently the dove atrophied inside the skull. Now I’ve forced it out, favoring strong emblems, images too pure for doubt: The Ark, the raven, the dove. The raven flew the globe but found no carrion worm. Because of instinct it was unable to confirm any paradigm or thought. Next the dove took flight and, though it failed at first, found a concrete symbol to quench the parched Ark’s thirst: one lonely olive leaf. But even olive leaf allows interpretation. Each stronger symbol creates its complication: the skull, the Ark, leaf and bird.
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Aug 11, 2012
Aug 11, 2012 at 7:12 PM UTC
The Raven and the Dove
The white dove has been symbolic of abstract things. I ask it to fly far, put muscle on its wings. Until recently the dove atrophied inside the skull. Now I’ve forced it out, favoring strong emblems, images too pure for doubt: The Ark, the raven, the dove. The raven flew the globe but found no carrion worm. Because of instinct it was unable to confirm any paradigm or thought. Next the dove took flight and, though it failed at first, found a concrete symbol to quench the parched Ark’s thirst: one lonely olive leaf. But even olive leaf allows interpretation. Each stronger symbol creates its complication: the skull, the Ark, leaf and bird.
This poem is about my stylistic movement away from abstract symbols into more definite ones, but then falls back on itself in the last stanza. I choose a concrete image from the Bible (i.e. Noah's raven and dove) that uses the abstract "dove" found in so many, many poems.
christopher-howard-gorrie
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Aug 11, 2012
Aug 11, 2012 at 7:12 PM UTC
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