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i tried forgetting you so hard my liver's collapsing & i've got these bruises & cuts - contusions & concussions - from my aggravation, concentrated on the wrong people in crowded places but we all need ventilation. so i spilled out abuse on whoever was willing to take it, combining fists with faces - call it distraction or entertainment, whichever way you phrase it, i won't remember...i was wasted - i was swimming in liquid sentiments the backstroke of the blind as i'm blacking out my mind, turning off the lights on the portion of my life you partially defined.
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Mar 3, 2010
Mar 3, 2010 at 8:30 PM UTC
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i tried forgetting you so hard my liver's collapsing & i've got these bruises & cuts - contusions & concussions - from my aggravation, concentrated on the wrong people in crowded places but we all need ventilation. so i spilled out abuse on whoever was willing to take it, combining fists with faces - call it distraction or entertainment, whichever way you phrase it, i won't remember...i was wasted - i was swimming in liquid sentiments the backstroke of the blind as i'm blacking out my mind, turning off the lights on the portion of my life you partially defined.
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Mar 3, 2010
Mar 3, 2010 at 8:30 PM UTC
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