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The blank page smiles, beguiling crinkling up lines around her beseeching eyes, behind the grin you see her boredom for such utter emptiness upon her. She calls sweet nothings to the pencil as he stands at attention waiting for his commands before he crosses the field leaving a trail of bent stalks in his wake. An eraser follows leaving bits of its skins as it slithers across the trail undoing the marks on the land. When work is done soldier, snake, lovely lass lie in the grass as the moon rises above them and the words fly up to the night sky.
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Jul 24, 2012
Jul 24, 2012 at 10:32 AM UTC
The Tale of the Empty Field
The blank page smiles, beguiling crinkling up lines around her beseeching eyes, behind the grin you see her boredom for such utter emptiness upon her. She calls sweet nothings to the pencil as he stands at attention waiting for his commands before he crosses the field leaving a trail of bent stalks in his wake. An eraser follows leaving bits of its skins as it slithers across the trail undoing the marks on the land. When work is done soldier, snake, lovely lass lie in the grass as the moon rises above them and the words fly up to the night sky.
Written in September of 2007. It was an imagining of what writing could be like close up and imbued with a sort of magic. The page is the lady, the soldier the pencil, the snake the eraser. I realized afterwards that there could be some biblical connotations with the man, woman, and snake but writing this at age 14 it wasn't on purpose. I do think the poem, as any poem, can mean so many things to so many people. I'd love to hear what you perceive when you read this. Thanks.
yuka-oiwa
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24/Genderqueer/American
Jul 24, 2012
Jul 24, 2012 at 10:32 AM UTC
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