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The house so full of symmetry light in every window in every angle, 360º view around the bend walls beginning to break from loneliness the light awash in so many colors on the canvas of the walls the hill behind still wet with the sun's light freshly painted themselves Purples, Oranges, Blues empty and yet so settled into the land the house on the hill An eternal, infernally short second as the car ride shakes my hand and my impressions blur.
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Jul 24, 2012
Jul 24, 2012 at 9:34 AM UTC
Abandoned House in Umbria
The house so full of symmetry light in every window in every angle, 360º view around the bend walls beginning to break from loneliness the light awash in so many colors on the canvas of the walls the hill behind still wet with the sun's light freshly painted themselves Purples, Oranges, Blues empty and yet so settled into the land the house on the hill An eternal, infernally short second as the car ride shakes my hand and my impressions blur.
This was written in rickety green pen in my Assisi notebook last summer. My small group of travelers and I were winding our way up the hillsides of Umbria on our way home when the evening light caught this singular house. In that small window I had to capture what I saw so there wasn't any punctuation or proper capitalization. I chose to keep it that way to keep the experience whole.
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24/Genderqueer/American
Jul 24, 2012
Jul 24, 2012 at 9:34 AM UTC
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