I am so perfect
That's what you said
But one day I wake
You suddenly left

I want us to last long
Tell me what I did wrong
But you wanna be alone
So who am I to say No

Yes I did everything
To keep us working
Thought you did same thing
That's what I'm thinking

Now that you are gone
I guess now I am done
Done with one sided love
The love I always have

kimkimmmie1016

my kind of love

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Momentum

When this happened to me, I learned a new skill. This is a sign that something good is about to happen for you! I'll be cheering when it happens!

removed.-m5ny

I am so perfect too. It's a fantastic fit.

kim-johanna-baker

Very well written Kimmmie, fantastic ending line!.. tyfs..kimx

sarah-jean-bradford

I relate to this so well. It is so hard to not bury yourself in love. It seems we always come up on the losing side. People leave... and you wish you hadn't give so much of yourself.

deovrat

patrick-j-fealy

"But when I ran away from you I thought that you would want me to
But I got a big surprise wooo o o
You could find beater things to do than break my heart again. "
John lennon

shivppal

Jeff-Gaines

Really well done! 

I LOVE the cadence of the rhymes!

christopher-victor-russon

removed.SuzyBerlinsky

removed.-71xr

this is exactly how i feel. it really hurts

star-bg

A Grand relationship is in the ethers just love yourself until they come. Thanks for writing.

christos-victor

how would you recognize the love that returns
shake the fevers, good character doesn't spurn

anthony-brady

Nobody's perfect Kim - only poetry can get close to perfection. Yours does, in terms of expressing love's emotion. The Venus de Milo is said to be perfect.  Your poem - My Kind of Love - shows that love is still valued - however defective.  I sampled your other posted poems and enjoyed the experience. Thank you for inviting my Comment.

mannley-collins

When searching for a lost thumbtack it is best to walk barefooted in the dark

swasti-jain

At this point in time,  this is just so relatable.

steven-l-herring

Poor thing!  We have all been there at one point or another. It'll get better. Good right

patricia-leduc

LoriJonesMcCaffery

brooklyn6timesplus

Nicely written poem Kim.    One-sided love is not fair to anyone!

salmabanu-hatim

Sorry but I am happy you have learnt to let go.There is always better pasture on the other side.

jerry-howarth

Hi there Kim,
Your poem sounds so sad, and my heart goes ou to you. God has a purpose and plans for your life, starting with
your subthiosow you theowmission to His only begotten Son, Jesus Christ, then wait for God to show you the next step.
Let me know how this works out.
Jerry

It is an old dilema. The objectification of a nan. They often say what you want to believe. All phonies through and through. While killing off the language with words that are not true. 
We ride upon their bridges now that often will fall down and drop us in the ocean the place where we shall drown. The  ran off with our money we saved to pay the rent.
And opened up the pigy bank and every penny spent
We have only tomorrow but listen
Listen with more Lear
The kind if people talking now are sounding rather queer.

andrew-guzaldo-c

Seems this has happened to most Poets the melancholy of LOVE, the wistful journey of sadness, as we harbor our pain within, as if nothing happened. Well Written TY  Now I will write Melancholy of LOVE

Calm_Snow

Beautiful and heartfelt poem. Worded really well to relate with others and to develop the story. Beautifully done.

removed.-4ff8

sajini-israel

Nice one it creates a vivid picture on my mind

charlesc

reality

Brava, you got it, the way to being us is seldom through us.  Great work, thanx for participating and for all you do; please, also, have a great day.   reality

jean-sharlot

True perhaps that is what he loved about her.