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I met a man along the road And crooked was his smile Crooked were the steps he took Along his crooked miles His arms were long, his fingers too Though neither pointed straight His legs were like two twisted ropes And cause his crooked gait He flashed a crooked grin at me And bared his crooked teeth He wore a crooked coat of black and no shirt underneath His body was a twisted mess Jutting all around His crooked bones rattled and cracked As he shuffled ‘cross the ground “And to where do you go?” His crooked voice rasped I pretended not to hear “Answer me my new young friend, There’s nothing for you to fear.” “I do not know,” I whispered back “I know not where I roam. but I know life lies ahead, and behind me lies my home.” “And where are your friends?” he asked of me A crooked gleam in his eye. “They did not want to come,” I said. “I never did learn why.” “My boy that’s cause they do not care, You’re not worth caring for! Look at you; useless, dumb Weak, ugly, and poor.” “Well how far have you come?” he asked. “13 years,” I said “Only 13?!” his broken voice creaked “Oh, you’re sure to end up dead.” “Better men have walked here than you, More experienced, and with more help. They died here alone, and so too will you. You’re an insignificant whelp.” ____________________________________________ I tried to ignore him, really I did I fought back against all his lies. But one cruel blow, on one cruel night I looked straight in the Crooked Man’s eyes. Then before I could scream My heart broke at the seem And I felt an unyielding pain My insides were hollow Mouth too dry to swallow I begged, “Please, make it stop!” So he took out a brand And placed it in my hand “Burn it out of your skin.” Then he watched with a smile Relaxed for a while As my agony tickled his ears Though I did as he bade He took out a blade “Not enough, try harder my boy!” But the blade and the brand One in each hand Could not purge the sorrow within So covered in scars Beneath all the stars The rest of my life began I fell to my knees as the crooked man laughed He placed a crooked hand on my head “Ignorant boy,” he said with some joy “You’re mine until you’re dead.” __________________________________________ For five long years we walked together Every night a repeat of the first And when others would pass, I’d smile and laugh They never knew I was cursed Then one fateful night the Crooked Man said “You’ve grown so dull and so dry!” He gave me the knife and said, “End your life.” “I believe its past time that you die.” I placed the knife against my neck And felt the familiar blade Just one more cut, like all the rest And my tortured life would fade I closed my eyes then took a breath And felt myself let go But right before I did the deed My broken heart said…”no” “no” I said, then “No” I growled Then “NO!” I screamed and screamed! I threw the knife into the dirt And doused the brand that gleamed I turned toward the Crooked Man His smile had withered away “Pick that up you worthless cur!” He tried his best to say I charged at him with all I had We fell hard into the mud “You’ll never win,” he grunted, “You’re weak! You’ve lost far too much blood!” “I have a home you wicked thing! Some friends and a family too! And I’ll never die, nor even try If it means they’re left with you!” ________________________________________ I still wrestle with the crooked man And sometimes he almost wins But I refuse to lose to him nor surrender to his whims “I’ll never let you go,” I say, “Or let you get ahead. Because you filthy sack of sin You’re mine until you’re dead.
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Oct 28, 2017
Oct 28, 2017 at 11:45 AM UTC
The Crooked Man
I met a man along the road And crooked was his smile Crooked were the steps he took Along his crooked miles His arms were long, his fingers too Though neither pointed straight His legs were like two twisted ropes And cause his crooked gait He flashed a crooked grin at me And bared his crooked teeth He wore a crooked coat of black and no shirt underneath His body was a twisted mess Jutting all around His crooked bones rattled and cracked As he shuffled ‘cross the ground “And to where do you go?” His crooked voice rasped I pretended not to hear “Answer me my new young friend, There’s nothing for you to fear.” “I do not know,” I whispered back “I know not where I roam. but I know life lies ahead, and behind me lies my home.” “And where are your friends?” he asked of me A crooked gleam in his eye. “They did not want to come,” I said. “I never did learn why.” “My boy that’s cause they do not care, You’re not worth caring for! Look at you; useless, dumb Weak, ugly, and poor.” “Well how far have you come?” he asked. “13 years,” I said “Only 13?!” his broken voice creaked “Oh, you’re sure to end up dead.” “Better men have walked here than you, More experienced, and with more help. They died here alone, and so too will you. You’re an insignificant whelp.” ____________________________________________ I tried to ignore him, really I did I fought back against all his lies. But one cruel blow, on one cruel night I looked straight in the Crooked Man’s eyes. Then before I could scream My heart broke at the seem And I felt an unyielding pain My insides were hollow Mouth too dry to swallow I begged, “Please, make it stop!” So he took out a brand And placed it in my hand “Burn it out of your skin.” Then he watched with a smile Relaxed for a while As my agony tickled his ears Though I did as he bade He took out a blade “Not enough, try harder my boy!” But the blade and the brand One in each hand Could not purge the sorrow within So covered in scars Beneath all the stars The rest of my life began I fell to my knees as the crooked man laughed He placed a crooked hand on my head “Ignorant boy,” he said with some joy “You’re mine until you’re dead.” __________________________________________ For five long years we walked together Every night a repeat of the first And when others would pass, I’d smile and laugh They never knew I was cursed Then one fateful night the Crooked Man said “You’ve grown so dull and so dry!” He gave me the knife and said, “End your life.” “I believe its past time that you die.” I placed the knife against my neck And felt the familiar blade Just one more cut, like all the rest And my tortured life would fade I closed my eyes then took a breath And felt myself let go But right before I did the deed My broken heart said…”no” “no” I said, then “No” I growled Then “NO!” I screamed and screamed! I threw the knife into the dirt And doused the brand that gleamed I turned toward the Crooked Man His smile had withered away “Pick that up you worthless cur!” He tried his best to say I charged at him with all I had We fell hard into the mud “You’ll never win,” he grunted, “You’re weak! You’ve lost far too much blood!” “I have a home you wicked thing! Some friends and a family too! And I’ll never die, nor even try If it means they’re left with you!” ________________________________________ I still wrestle with the crooked man And sometimes he almost wins But I refuse to lose to him nor surrender to his whims “I’ll never let you go,” I say, “Or let you get ahead. Because you filthy sack of sin You’re mine until you’re dead.
I attempted to use a switch in the rhyme scheme and the meter to add a feeling of speed and desperation to the middle. It was kind of an experiment so let me know if you like it. As always, thank you for taking the time to read, I hope my story helps those of you who have met the crooked man on your own journey. - ES
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Oct 28, 2017
Oct 28, 2017 at 11:45 AM UTC
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