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dreamingswanseyeaperturesboxboatsevergreenstarzenithgazing ~ while dreaming, i became a swan's eye, i was dreaming through both its apertures at once, clicking separately, click, click shuttering both sides from out a box, or from out a feathered, living boat, or two, severed visions superimposed: evergreen under, star over at a zenith gazing twice over paddling under ~
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Jul 15, 2012
Jul 15, 2012 at 5:02 PM UTC
not all languages have capitalization, or spaces beween words, i think (10/11w)
dreamingswanseyeaperturesboxboatsevergreenstarzenithgazing ~ while dreaming, i became a swan's eye, i was dreaming through both its apertures at once, clicking separately, click, click shuttering both sides from out a box, or from out a feathered, living boat, or two, severed visions superimposed: evergreen under, star over at a zenith gazing twice over paddling under ~
i actually wrote this years ago, to describe or try to make sense of a picture i drew in response to a vivid dream of mine... after reading somewhere that sanskrit doesn't have capital letters, and remembering something about Latin not having spaces, i just felt like expressing them together today, as one, and this is what happened
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Jul 15, 2012
Jul 15, 2012 at 5:02 PM UTC
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