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I look down: Control sinks away with every drop of sweat Beading together slowly, tickling my face And reminding me what loss is Surely soon this will be over And I will fight for her no longer Her full form still reminds me Of a task I must complete You are beautiful, I confess Lies now seem to ease her less A word devoid of meaning A joke told too many times She smiles politely And as I look down at her I feel my heart begin to tickle my face And almost purely out of instinct, I look away, to save myself
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Jul 13, 2012
Jul 13, 2012 at 2:42 PM UTC
Shelves Pt. 2
I look down: Control sinks away with every drop of sweat Beading together slowly, tickling my face And reminding me what loss is Surely soon this will be over And I will fight for her no longer Her full form still reminds me Of a task I must complete You are beautiful, I confess Lies now seem to ease her less A word devoid of meaning A joke told too many times She smiles politely And as I look down at her I feel my heart begin to tickle my face And almost purely out of instinct, I look away, to save myself
Note: This poem is really raw, please feel free to leave some feedback as to what I might be able to change. Also the current title, "Shelves" is a working title. One of my other works that this was transformed from was titled shelves so if you have any idea as to a title feel free as well
jonathan-mcneill
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Jul 13, 2012
Jul 13, 2012 at 2:42 PM UTC
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