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She was as elegant as winds shadow. In other words invisible Her otter skin eyes pool in oak trees Every ripple of leaves a whim.  A tear. She cries the dripping watercolors of fall Her boughs dances the florescence of spring Busy sprinters lick over her presented nuances Passed by every moment No one notices the silent hover of self made lush Anymore.
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Jul 12, 2012
Jul 12, 2012 at 12:30 AM UTC
Sitting In The Park
She was as elegant as winds shadow. In other words invisible Her otter skin eyes pool in oak trees Every ripple of leaves a whim.  A tear. She cries the dripping watercolors of fall Her boughs dances the florescence of spring Busy sprinters lick over her presented nuances Passed by every moment No one notices the silent hover of self made lush Anymore.
I'd love some harsh criticisms please :)
hallie-bear
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Jul 12, 2012
Jul 12, 2012 at 12:30 AM UTC
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