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it’s 9:30pm on a chilly autumn night i step into the passengers seat of your car as you start the engine music blaring from the speakers as the thundering bass vibrates through the entire car i couldn’t get a word out because it was so loud we stop at a red light I turn to look at you as the red light hits your face i wanted to take a picture it looked so aesthetically pleasing with your side profile as the red light shined in your face making your face bright red like the blush on my face when people ask me about you your grip on the steering is so strong that i can see your veins popping out you look so focused when you drive it’s **** with only one hand on the wheel the other i wish was gripping my thigh late night drives with you are my favorite - night drives
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Oct 11, 2017
Oct 11, 2017 at 1:01 PM UTC
night drives (revised version)
it’s 9:30pm on a chilly autumn night i step into the passengers seat of your car as you start the engine music blaring from the speakers as the thundering bass vibrates through the entire car i couldn’t get a word out because it was so loud we stop at a red light I turn to look at you as the red light hits your face i wanted to take a picture it looked so aesthetically pleasing with your side profile as the red light shined in your face making your face bright red like the blush on my face when people ask me about you your grip on the steering is so strong that i can see your veins popping out you look so focused when you drive it’s **** with only one hand on the wheel the other i wish was gripping my thigh late night drives with you are my favorite - night drives
helenawrites
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Oct 11, 2017
Oct 11, 2017 at 1:01 PM UTC
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