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she barged so uninvited in my space, so futile were my palms and outstretched arms, forbidding her from entering my place, mistrusting her that she may bring me harm, rebuttals--counterpunches to my claims that she was just another soulless ghost-- had penetrated fences, and her aims to win my heart succeeded more than most, but here we are almost a year from then, i've pushed her off, she shares her heart with one not me, but one who seems above all men, and i have lost where once i thought i'd won, now i'm the one who's barging in her space, my own rebuttals falling in disgrace (C)2012, Christos Rigakos
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Jul 9, 2012
Jul 9, 2012 at 12:35 PM UTC
she barged so uninvited in my space
she barged so uninvited in my space, so futile were my palms and outstretched arms, forbidding her from entering my place, mistrusting her that she may bring me harm, rebuttals--counterpunches to my claims that she was just another soulless ghost-- had penetrated fences, and her aims to win my heart succeeded more than most, but here we are almost a year from then, i've pushed her off, she shares her heart with one not me, but one who seems above all men, and i have lost where once i thought i'd won, now i'm the one who's barging in her space, my own rebuttals falling in disgrace (C)2012, Christos Rigakos
English (Shakespearean) Sonnet
christos-rigakos
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Jul 9, 2012
Jul 9, 2012 at 12:35 PM UTC
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