Baby i tried dont be like this.
Please dont be a *****
I love you.
I want you.
I need you.
Please say your mine.
Or i shall die.
A painful death.
~dominick j kyle

dominick-1

don't be like that

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richard-j-heby

"Please say your mine."
you mean to say: "Please say you're mine."

also, i think you could benefit from messing around with punctuation. not every line has to be end-stopped. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/End-stopping

on that note, "Baby i tried dont be like this." would read better as "Baby, i tried, don't be like this." or even "Baby i tried. dont be like this."

ellie-3