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She walks through the congested room, small smile on her immaculate face. Battenberg pink lips in a place packed chaotically with men in dark shirts, skin coated in shiny sweat. But our girl is dressed in a see-through white, clutching a toffee bag, she moves further into the pit. Her eyelids flicker enigmatic ebony, waves of bronze hair roll down past the shoulders. We’ve never met, we may never meet at all but my days she is dazzling, a rush of fresh air. In a different place in a different time, who knows? Would I be pricked by such profound beauty? I don’t know how I came across your name, found your photos and was taken aback. Nevertheless glad my eyes have seen your brilliance, but let’s get back to real life now shall we?
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Jul 1, 2012
Jul 1, 2012 at 3:19 PM UTC
Holly
She walks through the congested room, small smile on her immaculate face. Battenberg pink lips in a place packed chaotically with men in dark shirts, skin coated in shiny sweat. But our girl is dressed in a see-through white, clutching a toffee bag, she moves further into the pit. Her eyelids flicker enigmatic ebony, waves of bronze hair roll down past the shoulders. We’ve never met, we may never meet at all but my days she is dazzling, a rush of fresh air. In a different place in a different time, who knows? Would I be pricked by such profound beauty? I don’t know how I came across your name, found your photos and was taken aback. Nevertheless glad my eyes have seen your brilliance, but let’s get back to real life now shall we?
Written: July 2012. Explanation: A poem written in my own time about a photograph (one of several) I recently saw online of a girl I have never met.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Jul 1, 2012
Jul 1, 2012 at 3:19 PM UTC
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