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la la la la is this what love feels like or what I want it to feel like when it comes slam-bamming in the snigger on the stairs first saxophone note my throat knows the right words speak of succulent fruits count the seconds it takes for our fingers to crumple in warm baths look toothbrushes together own side of the bed I have a side where I sleep in the madness of you la la la la I can’t sing but I must have swallowed a pill or a bucketful of elation look at me go ha ha does it crunch as an apple is it flat pack furniture cup of coffee in the same café steam to sip sip sip my temperature spiking blood thunderstorm in my ears coloured hair new language list of I’m becomings you’re becomings oh darling not pumpkin never pumpkin lyrically I’m losing it love like this or not at all my love maybe a shelf without books maybe a house we paint or a song how it starts
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Sep 21, 2017
Sep 21, 2017 at 7:06 PM UTC
Toothbrush Song
la la la la is this what love feels like or what I want it to feel like when it comes slam-bamming in the snigger on the stairs first saxophone note my throat knows the right words speak of succulent fruits count the seconds it takes for our fingers to crumple in warm baths look toothbrushes together own side of the bed I have a side where I sleep in the madness of you la la la la I can’t sing but I must have swallowed a pill or a bucketful of elation look at me go ha ha does it crunch as an apple is it flat pack furniture cup of coffee in the same café steam to sip sip sip my temperature spiking blood thunderstorm in my ears coloured hair new language list of I’m becomings you’re becomings oh darling not pumpkin never pumpkin lyrically I’m losing it love like this or not at all my love maybe a shelf without books maybe a house we paint or a song how it starts
Written: September 2017. Explanation: A poem written in my own time. A rare occassion where I am very happy with the end product. Feedback highly welcome and appreciated on this piece. A link to my Facebook writing page can be found on my HP home page. NOTE: Many of my older pieces will be removed from HP at some point in the future.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Sep 21, 2017
Sep 21, 2017 at 7:06 PM UTC
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