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You abandoned me You left me like a useless old puppy What happened to all the love we once used to share? The love that once brewed in the summer air What about all the good times? Times spent cuddling as the bell of love chimes Now it’s colder Chills have blown over Sending solemn vibes my way With every glance, I fray Eyes that I once melted under Now pierce my heart with spears you plunder My slowing heart is dying Your every touch used to be so exciting Now I am lost I used to chase after you at all cost Tailing you as we followed our heart But now, you suggest we part My yearning to go with you to ends of the earth My past belief that you’d stay at my hearth Built from the once roaring fire This burning feeling longing to respire You left me like a useless old puppy You abandoned me
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Sep 14, 2017
Sep 14, 2017 at 11:58 PM UTC
you abandoned me
You abandoned me You left me like a useless old puppy What happened to all the love we once used to share? The love that once brewed in the summer air What about all the good times? Times spent cuddling as the bell of love chimes Now it’s colder Chills have blown over Sending solemn vibes my way With every glance, I fray Eyes that I once melted under Now pierce my heart with spears you plunder My slowing heart is dying Your every touch used to be so exciting Now I am lost I used to chase after you at all cost Tailing you as we followed our heart But now, you suggest we part My yearning to go with you to ends of the earth My past belief that you’d stay at my hearth Built from the once roaring fire This burning feeling longing to respire You left me like a useless old puppy You abandoned me
Anyone have suggestions to how this could be better? I really didn't know how to go about with this one.
#yearn#longing#abandoned#feeling#love#heart#broken
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Hughie
Lost... somewhere
Sep 14, 2017
Sep 14, 2017 at 11:58 PM UTC
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