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So often I feel like you are fruit Placed gently on me, a sandpaper offering plate. I do not want to hold you so roughly, But there are things I am still learning Placed gently on me, a sandpaper offering plate My rough rubs you slowly, But there are things I am still learning. How we are unto diamonds. My rough rubs you slowly, Until we are evenly raw. How we are unto diamonds; I wish I was that soft. Until we are evenly raw, This feels like the devolution of beauty. I wish I was that soft. Something similar to dying fruit. This feels like the devolution of beauty. Soon you will no longer be sweet. Something similar to dying fruit. And I am a sandpaper monster still learning, And so often I feel like you are fruit.
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Jun 18, 2012
Jun 18, 2012 at 7:21 PM UTC
So Often This Feels (A Pantoum)
So often I feel like you are fruit Placed gently on me, a sandpaper offering plate. I do not want to hold you so roughly, But there are things I am still learning Placed gently on me, a sandpaper offering plate My rough rubs you slowly, But there are things I am still learning. How we are unto diamonds. My rough rubs you slowly, Until we are evenly raw. How we are unto diamonds; I wish I was that soft. Until we are evenly raw, This feels like the devolution of beauty. I wish I was that soft. Something similar to dying fruit. This feels like the devolution of beauty. Soon you will no longer be sweet. Something similar to dying fruit. And I am a sandpaper monster still learning, And so often I feel like you are fruit.
My attempt at a Pantoum style poem.
jon-tobias
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Jun 18, 2012
Jun 18, 2012 at 7:21 PM UTC
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