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The paradox of timelessness and love which haunts us with a sense of urgency. It beats with more viscosity than my blood. It fills my lungs more than oxygen ever could.
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Jun 16, 2012
Jun 16, 2012 at 11:15 PM UTC
Help me finish this poem! - An experiment
The paradox of timelessness and love which haunts us with a sense of urgency. It beats with more viscosity than my blood. It fills my lungs more than oxygen ever could.
I started with the words "a paradox of timelessness and love" and knew I wanted to expand on that idea. I've been toying with this for hours and I'm hitting the backspace key more than anything else. I'm asking for your help, a collaborative effort of sorts. Feel free to suggest anything, but I want to keep that phrase intact, and I want to maintain the theme described in the first two lines. Even if you don't contribute, pass it along and share this so that others may offer their "two cents". I look forward to seeing the results!
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Jun 16, 2012
Jun 16, 2012 at 11:15 PM UTC
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