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you need a moment, sometimes, a moment can be a series of seconds that add up to forty winks; a moment of quite, time away from the clamor and the crowd and the hungry away from the brightness, the lights and the demanding, and the conversations and questions, and queries and routine just away from people to think a little perhaps to drop into the quiet of oneself a moment in the chair, elbow on the table – could have shut the door, you know, so the creak will wake, alert you, maybe; could have had a fruit (did you?), or could have moved the spare chair round so any intruder would have to move it which would have served as ample warning and you could’ve said: “Oh, how dusty in here, just cleaning up, nearly finished…” but maybe you’ve your own devices and stratagems whatever, we’d just say now, looking at you the way Vermeer’s left you for us, dear girl asleep, you sleeping, retired into this quiet, into this room in your corner, elbow on the table, you in the chair, leaning sideways we’d say, seeing you: *you need a moment, sometimes, a moment of quiet, time away – hey, good on you…*
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Jun 14, 2012
Jun 14, 2012 at 6:56 PM UTC
girl asleep
you need a moment, sometimes, a moment can be a series of seconds that add up to forty winks; a moment of quite, time away from the clamor and the crowd and the hungry away from the brightness, the lights and the demanding, and the conversations and questions, and queries and routine just away from people to think a little perhaps to drop into the quiet of oneself a moment in the chair, elbow on the table – could have shut the door, you know, so the creak will wake, alert you, maybe; could have had a fruit (did you?), or could have moved the spare chair round so any intruder would have to move it which would have served as ample warning and you could’ve said: “Oh, how dusty in here, just cleaning up, nearly finished…” but maybe you’ve your own devices and stratagems whatever, we’d just say now, looking at you the way Vermeer’s left you for us, dear girl asleep, you sleeping, retired into this quiet, into this room in your corner, elbow on the table, you in the chair, leaning sideways we’d say, seeing you: *you need a moment, sometimes, a moment of quiet, time away – hey, good on you…*
poem based on painting of "girl (or maid) asleep" by Johannes Vermeer
raj-arumugam
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Australian
Jun 14, 2012
Jun 14, 2012 at 6:56 PM UTC
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