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in the fullness of the dark, we forget to remember that we’ve been only able to see about ten seconds worth of anything at all. because of nature’s need to quench thirsty soil she spoils our sight of the sun’s blackening behind the shadow of our cratered cousin, with cumulonimbus. however, the humanity with which I’ve gathered for a while has been rife with disappointment, until just now. in this circle of sunset, we are overwhelmed with the totality, our disappointments fade, eclipsed by wonder and the sudden coolness in the air, which is audible in its silence. the clouds that purloined our sleek vantage point are purpled strokes of a celestial brush that none of us could have hoped to lift. now, as the sun reemerges, rises again, this time in the west, the city lights wink out as midday returns. we return from our own Olympus as well, all the better for it. un-disappointed, alive in a way that never existed before.     *** -JBClaywell © P&ZPublications
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Aug 23, 2017
Aug 23, 2017 at 5:42 PM UTC
During Totality
in the fullness of the dark, we forget to remember that we’ve been only able to see about ten seconds worth of anything at all. because of nature’s need to quench thirsty soil she spoils our sight of the sun’s blackening behind the shadow of our cratered cousin, with cumulonimbus. however, the humanity with which I’ve gathered for a while has been rife with disappointment, until just now. in this circle of sunset, we are overwhelmed with the totality, our disappointments fade, eclipsed by wonder and the sudden coolness in the air, which is audible in its silence. the clouds that purloined our sleek vantage point are purpled strokes of a celestial brush that none of us could have hoped to lift. now, as the sun reemerges, rises again, this time in the west, the city lights wink out as midday returns. we return from our own Olympus as well, all the better for it. un-disappointed, alive in a way that never existed before.     *** -JBClaywell © P&ZPublications
Eclipse Poem
jay-claywell
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Aug 23, 2017
Aug 23, 2017 at 5:42 PM UTC
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