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there’s something about    boiling kettle lungs      words slopping from your mouth like clumps of mashed potato      the way you have this river of dialogue    made from papier-mâché      and haphazard glitter so easily breakable    it’s best to start afresh that makes you stop      and place your head against    the cool windowpane and say you cannot do this    you might but you can’t so no the umcomfortableness diverted      scribbled over with a Biro    so ignore the sandpaper taste      on your tongue or the jacket of heat      that smothers your chest    focus on a pinprick of positivity like a streetlamp in another town    let the steam from the tea      guide you to safety
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Aug 17, 2017
Aug 17, 2017 at 5:58 PM UTC
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there’s something about    boiling kettle lungs      words slopping from your mouth like clumps of mashed potato      the way you have this river of dialogue    made from papier-mâché      and haphazard glitter so easily breakable    it’s best to start afresh that makes you stop      and place your head against    the cool windowpane and say you cannot do this    you might but you can’t so no the umcomfortableness diverted      scribbled over with a Biro    so ignore the sandpaper taste      on your tongue or the jacket of heat      that smothers your chest    focus on a pinprick of positivity like a streetlamp in another town    let the steam from the tea      guide you to safety
Written: August 2017. Explanation: A poem written in my own time that I'm actually quite happy with - 'uncomfortableness' is not a word but I thought I'd keep it in as it sounds OK to me. All feedback welcome. A link to my Facebook writing page can be found on my HP home page. NOTE: Many of my older pieces will be removed from HP at some point in the future.
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33/M/English
Aug 17, 2017
Aug 17, 2017 at 5:58 PM UTC
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