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I'm dying inside, As you're suffering in pain; For you have no clue - How much I love you darling, Wish your day is bright then blue. * I deserve; this pain, For it's nothing compared to; What I've given you, I will love you forever, If only my love, you knew. * ©sim
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Aug 14, 2017
Aug 14, 2017 at 8:12 AM UTC
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I'm dying inside, As you're suffering in pain; For you have no clue - How much I love you darling, Wish your day is bright then blue. * I deserve; this pain, For it's nothing compared to; What I've given you, I will love you forever, If only my love, you knew. * ©sim
Somonka is two tankas wrapped up in one. Basically written by two or single writer(s). A Japanese verse. The syllables count of 5-7-5-7-7-5-7-5-7-7
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41/F/Fiji Islands
Aug 14, 2017
Aug 14, 2017 at 8:12 AM UTC
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