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I watch as my life breaks into more and more pieces, I try to glue it back together but it only brakes further, And as I watch it break I also see it starts to burn and go up in flames, I try to cling on to every last bit, I inhale the smoke only to realize that it’s gone and I’m on my own, Alone with the bitter taste in my mouth from the smoke,
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Aug 7, 2017
Aug 7, 2017 at 2:48 PM UTC
Breaks Into pieces
I watch as my life breaks into more and more pieces, I try to glue it back together but it only brakes further, And as I watch it break I also see it starts to burn and go up in flames, I try to cling on to every last bit, I inhale the smoke only to realize that it’s gone and I’m on my own, Alone with the bitter taste in my mouth from the smoke,
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Aug 7, 2017
Aug 7, 2017 at 2:48 PM UTC
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