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Adali offered Father’s stranger more wine. We all knew he’d accept. On our way to the woods though, Someone stepped upon my dress. “Oh Yseult,” Conradine cried. “Stop imagining things” They didn’t think I was right. The trees were beautiful every time We walked the paths by the midnight moon. The first was silver, The second gold, But we all loved diamonds the most. Again I could feel someone following: The trees never made a sound. “Oh Yseult,” Ediline hushed. “You really are too old for these games.” They didn’t think I was right. I tugged on Galiana’s left glove- We’d always been close- Thinking she’d believe me this once. But the boys in the boats were too tempting for us. I told Oskar there was something wrong, The boat was too heavy for him to row. “Oh Yseult,” Irmuska gasped. “You didn’t even eat today!” They didn’t think I was right. Within minutes we arrived At our sanctuary, our dancing hall. We laced up our shoes But I watched the boat groan and rock. “Oh Yseult,” Katchen teased. “That’s just the tide pulling it in.” They didn’t think I was right. Hours passed as I danced With my Oskar. However, the sinking feeling We’d been caught lingered. “Oh Yseult,” Magnild snorted. “Your delusioning is quite perturbing.” They didn’t think I was right. Oskar took me away To the side of the room. He knew my shoes had worn straight through. I watched out the corner of my eye A golden chalice float away. “Oh Yseult,” Otylia reprimanded. “Your childish ways are far too much!” They didn’t think I was right. The brothers rowed me And my sisters back home. Kissing us each goodnight, They returned to their boats Thinking we’d see them tomorrow. I heard a creaking sound behind us. Once again I tried to warn them. “Oh Yseult,” Rille rolled her beautiful eyes. “Please stop being stupid for once.” They didn’t think I was right. We returned to our bedroom Without further commotion. When we arrived though Our secret door would not close. “Oh Yseult,” Tieran chided. “I know you’re youngest, but you can’t be that weak.” They didn’t think I was right. Father’s stranger was right in his bed Snoring loud as inhumanly possible. I knew it couldn’t be real So I tried to reason with my sister’s again. “Oh Yseult,” Viheke yawned. “Go to sleep now, you’re far too tired.” They didn’t think I was right. When the morning arrived Father threw open our door. The anger and happiness Flowed from him moronically. In his left hand were branches Silver, gold, and diamond. In his right Was Oskar’s chalice. Behind him was Father’s stranger Smug and pleased. He requested Adali’s hand in marriage, Just as Father promised. “Oh Yseult,” My eleven sisters cried in unison. “We should have listened!” They didn’t think I was right.
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Aug 3, 2017
Aug 3, 2017 at 11:59 PM UTC
Right Through the Slippers
Adali offered Father’s stranger more wine. We all knew he’d accept. On our way to the woods though, Someone stepped upon my dress. “Oh Yseult,” Conradine cried. “Stop imagining things” They didn’t think I was right. The trees were beautiful every time We walked the paths by the midnight moon. The first was silver, The second gold, But we all loved diamonds the most. Again I could feel someone following: The trees never made a sound. “Oh Yseult,” Ediline hushed. “You really are too old for these games.” They didn’t think I was right. I tugged on Galiana’s left glove- We’d always been close- Thinking she’d believe me this once. But the boys in the boats were too tempting for us. I told Oskar there was something wrong, The boat was too heavy for him to row. “Oh Yseult,” Irmuska gasped. “You didn’t even eat today!” They didn’t think I was right. Within minutes we arrived At our sanctuary, our dancing hall. We laced up our shoes But I watched the boat groan and rock. “Oh Yseult,” Katchen teased. “That’s just the tide pulling it in.” They didn’t think I was right. Hours passed as I danced With my Oskar. However, the sinking feeling We’d been caught lingered. “Oh Yseult,” Magnild snorted. “Your delusioning is quite perturbing.” They didn’t think I was right. Oskar took me away To the side of the room. He knew my shoes had worn straight through. I watched out the corner of my eye A golden chalice float away. “Oh Yseult,” Otylia reprimanded. “Your childish ways are far too much!” They didn’t think I was right. The brothers rowed me And my sisters back home. Kissing us each goodnight, They returned to their boats Thinking we’d see them tomorrow. I heard a creaking sound behind us. Once again I tried to warn them. “Oh Yseult,” Rille rolled her beautiful eyes. “Please stop being stupid for once.” They didn’t think I was right. We returned to our bedroom Without further commotion. When we arrived though Our secret door would not close. “Oh Yseult,” Tieran chided. “I know you’re youngest, but you can’t be that weak.” They didn’t think I was right. Father’s stranger was right in his bed Snoring loud as inhumanly possible. I knew it couldn’t be real So I tried to reason with my sister’s again. “Oh Yseult,” Viheke yawned. “Go to sleep now, you’re far too tired.” They didn’t think I was right. When the morning arrived Father threw open our door. The anger and happiness Flowed from him moronically. In his left hand were branches Silver, gold, and diamond. In his right Was Oskar’s chalice. Behind him was Father’s stranger Smug and pleased. He requested Adali’s hand in marriage, Just as Father promised. “Oh Yseult,” My eleven sisters cried in unison. “We should have listened!” They didn’t think I was right.
This is my variation on The Twelve Dancing Princesses. It was a German fairytale so all the names are German. In the story, there are 12 sisters, each prettier than the last. Every day they are exhausted and their dancing slippers are worn out. Their father questions them but they refuse to answer. He instead declares that he will give his kingdom and daughters to the first person who can figure out the mystery. Each participant only has 3 days to solve the puzzle and faces death if he fails. One day a soldier comes. He has been given a cloak by an old woman in the forest. It will make him invisible. She also warns him not to eat or drink anything the princesses offer. He discovers that the princesses sneak out each night to meet with 12 princes and they dance the night away until they've worn out their slippers. He collects each of the items I used in the poem as evidence. The morning after the third night he approaches the king with his evidence. He is given one princess and becomes heir to the kingdom. The princesses are cursed for their disobedience.
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Aug 3, 2017
Aug 3, 2017 at 11:59 PM UTC
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