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August 2, 2017 His beautiful field that lay before my eyes Made up of many ties Red ribbons being tied to many roses The sea of pastel roses that Eve chose As it will never decompose The roses will bloom forever Which puts me in admiration in how it’s wonderfully clever Because despite them having thorns that harm me, it’s what also brings out their beauty It’s what also makes the garden smell strangely fruity… Each rose had a purpose as they were not picked at random They are being strongly protected by the hands of Adam But my fate turns its head around And what a sight I see as my eyes take a pound A field of darkness...something like an empty void It’s something I always tried to avoid Because that field unfortunately is actually mine I believe there is no more time All of the beauty of the Garden of Wisdom has withered My garden looks like it just went through a blizzard Filled with disappointments, I left the two fields with a sad sigh I guess there could be more than what meets the eye Oh how cruel my reality is compared to His, how cruel can my reality be? One more day, is what I tell myself with hope that I can now finally live a lively life...but honestly... when can I be free?
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Aug 3, 2017
Aug 3, 2017 at 3:58 AM UTC
The Garden I Envy
August 2, 2017 His beautiful field that lay before my eyes Made up of many ties Red ribbons being tied to many roses The sea of pastel roses that Eve chose As it will never decompose The roses will bloom forever Which puts me in admiration in how it’s wonderfully clever Because despite them having thorns that harm me, it’s what also brings out their beauty It’s what also makes the garden smell strangely fruity… Each rose had a purpose as they were not picked at random They are being strongly protected by the hands of Adam But my fate turns its head around And what a sight I see as my eyes take a pound A field of darkness...something like an empty void It’s something I always tried to avoid Because that field unfortunately is actually mine I believe there is no more time All of the beauty of the Garden of Wisdom has withered My garden looks like it just went through a blizzard Filled with disappointments, I left the two fields with a sad sigh I guess there could be more than what meets the eye Oh how cruel my reality is compared to His, how cruel can my reality be? One more day, is what I tell myself with hope that I can now finally live a lively life...but honestly... when can I be free?
I love you all. Hope everyone will have a wonderful day!
OJF_xxvii
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20/F/Canada, Alberta
Aug 3, 2017
Aug 3, 2017 at 3:58 AM UTC
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