The coach drew up
at the base camp
in Malaga.
Miriam and I
got off
and eyed the scene
the area of tents
and bars
and camp restaurant
and the club house
where they had discos
in the evening until late.
We followed our guide
who showed us
where our tents were.
I was with an ex-army guy
Miriam was with
some other dame.
See you later
at the bar
she said.
Will do
I replied.
The ex-army unzipped
the tent
we clambered in
with our bags
then he zipped up again.
Better than
the last camp
he said morosely.
I placed by bag
to one side
and got out
my sleeping bag
and lay on it
to rest
for a short while.
He unpacked
his sleeping bag
(better than mine
probably ex-army)
and lay down
staring at the roof
of the tent.
He talked about
his army days
and about his mother's
new boyfriend
and how he didn't
get on with him
and how he only left
the army because
of his nerves
and depression.
I listened
but in my mind's eye
it was Miriam
there **********
and I thinking
that a blessing.
Jul 31, 2017
Jul 31, 2017 at 3:50 AM UTC
The coach drew up
at the base camp
in Malaga.
Miriam and I
got off
and eyed the scene
the area of tents
and bars
and camp restaurant
and the club house
where they had discos
in the evening until late.
We followed our guide
who showed us
where our tents were.
I was with an ex-army guy
Miriam was with
some other dame.
See you later
at the bar
she said.
Will do
I replied.
The ex-army unzipped
the tent
we clambered in
with our bags
then he zipped up again.
Better than
the last camp
he said morosely.
I placed by bag
to one side
and got out
my sleeping bag
and lay on it
to rest
for a short while.
He unpacked
his sleeping bag
(better than mine
probably ex-army)
and lay down
staring at the roof
of the tent.
He talked about
his army days
and about his mother's
new boyfriend
and how he didn't
get on with him
and how he only left
the army because
of his nerves
and depression.
I listened
but in my mind's eye
it was Miriam
there **********
and I thinking
that a blessing.
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