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Alice sits brushing her hair, stroke following stroke, her husband sitting on the edge of the bed watching, studying her hand and brush going downward and out and downward and out, and as he watches he suddenly remembers his mother doing likewise and he standing by the doorframe of her bedroom, sees her hand pull the brush through her tight black hair, and hears her sobbing voice over the old white radio playing some country song, and senses an uneasiness fill him like a wetting of pants, and his mother gazing at him in the mirror before her with her red rimmed eyes and he knowing as she lifts the brush threateningly, that that way pain comes and danger lies.
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Jun 1, 2012
Jun 1, 2012 at 8:23 AM UTC
AS ALICE DOES.
Alice sits brushing her hair, stroke following stroke, her husband sitting on the edge of the bed watching, studying her hand and brush going downward and out and downward and out, and as he watches he suddenly remembers his mother doing likewise and he standing by the doorframe of her bedroom, sees her hand pull the brush through her tight black hair, and hears her sobbing voice over the old white radio playing some country song, and senses an uneasiness fill him like a wetting of pants, and his mother gazing at him in the mirror before her with her red rimmed eyes and he knowing as she lifts the brush threateningly, that that way pain comes and danger lies.
terry-collett
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Jun 1, 2012
Jun 1, 2012 at 8:23 AM UTC
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