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Taken back to my earlier age's around 4 or 5 year's old, Craving the air breath by breath, my blanky I can no longer hold. Laugh's and giggle's was my brother's and I, We had so much fun together, who would think today I will die. It seemed my life flashed before me and all went slow-mo, Darkness grabbed ahold of me and wouldn't t let me go. Fighting against fear I tried not being afraid, As young as I was I knew I should pray. The frantic noise began to drown out, My vision no longer as was. My body so exhausted my memory's began to fuzz. The fear inside me vanished suddenly without weigh, I knew immediately god was there beside me to test my fate. With every breath taken the more my world fainted away, My brother's frantic voice's, "Don't go, don't leave, please stay". I felt my tear's roll down my cheek, I smiled to my sibling's then closed my eye's. At peace on earth where I lie, I stretch my wing's and fly up high, Up to the heaven's gate's in the sky.
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Jul 25, 2017
Jul 25, 2017 at 7:18 PM UTC
Asthma made me sleep
Taken back to my earlier age's around 4 or 5 year's old, Craving the air breath by breath, my blanky I can no longer hold. Laugh's and giggle's was my brother's and I, We had so much fun together, who would think today I will die. It seemed my life flashed before me and all went slow-mo, Darkness grabbed ahold of me and wouldn't t let me go. Fighting against fear I tried not being afraid, As young as I was I knew I should pray. The frantic noise began to drown out, My vision no longer as was. My body so exhausted my memory's began to fuzz. The fear inside me vanished suddenly without weigh, I knew immediately god was there beside me to test my fate. With every breath taken the more my world fainted away, My brother's frantic voice's, "Don't go, don't leave, please stay". I felt my tear's roll down my cheek, I smiled to my sibling's then closed my eye's. At peace on earth where I lie, I stretch my wing's and fly up high, Up to the heaven's gate's in the sky.
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Jul 25, 2017
Jul 25, 2017 at 7:18 PM UTC
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