And I told 'er
your old man
don't go round 'er place
for nothink
he must be up ta
somethink
the woman said.
Benny’s mother
did not reply
but nodded
as in agreement.
His mother
never dropped her H's
and her vowels
were rounded
giving the impression
of upmarket
or posh sounding.
Stands ta reason
I told 'er
can't trust men
as far as you can
throw 'em.
Benny stood
behind his mother
gazing at the cakes
on display
in the glass case
shelf after shelf of them.
His mouth watered
at the ones at the bottom
with shredded
coconut on top.
He wondered
if he could persuade
his mother to buy
him a coconut cake
only 4d
for Christ’s-sake.
But he never asked
he understood
that things
were tight
and it was only right
she spend her
money wisely.
But still
his mouth watered.
But will she listen?
the woman continued
not on your belly
goes all off with me
only doing it
for your sake
I says to 'er.
His mother nodded
looked at the woman kindly
but with a sense
of stiffness or aloofness
Benny thought.
Once the old girl
had gone
and the shopping bought
Benny’s dream
of cake or cakes
came to nought.
Jul 24, 2017
Jul 24, 2017 at 6:37 AM UTC
And I told 'er
your old man
don't go round 'er place
for nothink
he must be up ta
somethink
the woman said.
Benny’s mother
did not reply
but nodded
as in agreement.
His mother
never dropped her H's
and her vowels
were rounded
giving the impression
of upmarket
or posh sounding.
Stands ta reason
I told 'er
can't trust men
as far as you can
throw 'em.
Benny stood
behind his mother
gazing at the cakes
on display
in the glass case
shelf after shelf of them.
His mouth watered
at the ones at the bottom
with shredded
coconut on top.
He wondered
if he could persuade
his mother to buy
him a coconut cake
only 4d
for Christ’s-sake.
But he never asked
he understood
that things
were tight
and it was only right
she spend her
money wisely.
But still
his mouth watered.
But will she listen?
the woman continued
not on your belly
goes all off with me
only doing it
for your sake
I says to 'er.
His mother nodded
looked at the woman kindly
but with a sense
of stiffness or aloofness
Benny thought.
Once the old girl
had gone
and the shopping bought
Benny’s dream
of cake or cakes
came to nought.
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