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She was a red head wearing a red dress smoking a cigarette sipping her coffee. You were sitting beside her black suit blue shirt black tie holding a cigarette between fingers. I think he suspects she said. Suspects what? You said. That I'm seeing someone else. You took a drag on the smoke does he suspect who? You said. Not yet but he will fish and get to find out. She inhaled smoke and looked at the guy behind the counter serving another man along the bar. Let him fish I don't give a **** you said. Maybe we should go off together she said. Go where? You said. Anywhere as long as it's away from him she said turning to look at you. I ain't going no where you said if you want to leave the **** come to my place he won't find you there and if he does he'll have me to see him off. She looked away and inhaled smoke again. He has a temper and a gun she said exhaling smoke as she spoke. Up to you Honey take it or leave it I don't run no place you said. The jukebox started up some Elvis guy singing. She sat silent moodily gazing at her mug of coffee. I'll see how he goes she said can't leave just yet see you tomorrow afternoon? Sure you said you bet.
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Jul 13, 2017
Jul 13, 2017 at 3:01 PM UTC
THORNTON'S OFFER 1958
She was a red head wearing a red dress smoking a cigarette sipping her coffee. You were sitting beside her black suit blue shirt black tie holding a cigarette between fingers. I think he suspects she said. Suspects what? You said. That I'm seeing someone else. You took a drag on the smoke does he suspect who? You said. Not yet but he will fish and get to find out. She inhaled smoke and looked at the guy behind the counter serving another man along the bar. Let him fish I don't give a **** you said. Maybe we should go off together she said. Go where? You said. Anywhere as long as it's away from him she said turning to look at you. I ain't going no where you said if you want to leave the **** come to my place he won't find you there and if he does he'll have me to see him off. She looked away and inhaled smoke again. He has a temper and a gun she said exhaling smoke as she spoke. Up to you Honey take it or leave it I don't run no place you said. The jukebox started up some Elvis guy singing. She sat silent moodily gazing at her mug of coffee. I'll see how he goes she said can't leave just yet see you tomorrow afternoon? Sure you said you bet.
A MANA ND WOMAN IN A COFFEE BAR IN 1958
TerryCollett
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Jul 13, 2017
Jul 13, 2017 at 3:01 PM UTC
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