play me love's music
harmonise our hearts'&nbsp;&nbsp;tempo
practice every day

martin

loveheart (senryu)

The kind of senryu I wish more poets aspired to.
Lovely and inspirational!

Once I get my brain out of nature mode, I will have to try one of these too. :-) Thanks.

so elegant, though I had to look up 'senryu'.

practice makes perfect and this is just that!

Never heard of "senryu" before either, but I like it. This one, especially! Great write.

My mom really likes this. Its real cool its a small poem. With nice words.:)