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(Well, I was sitting in the car that time.) (sonnet #MMMMMMCCCCLIX) Orange Tiger Lilies in a cluster, frail Yet nodding to soft whispers' vagrant sense Wink as we slowly gain on whither hence, Some tractor's clearing space for which detail? Along the field thet prairie grasses hail From, and when Joe has time, he calls me thence A "doll," to net "I love you" fr'intents, To say he'll try to call this weekend: bail. It's so--yes, what? For now he'd notice fer Whatever what I'm wearing--"is it new?" No, what I'd worn the day he 'gan to stir My heart with that petunia's purple. To That lo, he must go pick another. Were Fun ah, passe, I'm loving all he'd do. 29Jun17a
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Jul 12, 2017
Jul 12, 2017 at 7:53 PM UTC
And Yes, He Still Kisses My Hand
(Well, I was sitting in the car that time.) (sonnet #MMMMMMCCCCLIX) Orange Tiger Lilies in a cluster, frail Yet nodding to soft whispers' vagrant sense Wink as we slowly gain on whither hence, Some tractor's clearing space for which detail? Along the field thet prairie grasses hail From, and when Joe has time, he calls me thence A "doll," to net "I love you" fr'intents, To say he'll try to call this weekend: bail. It's so--yes, what? For now he'd notice fer Whatever what I'm wearing--"is it new?" No, what I'd worn the day he 'gan to stir My heart with that petunia's purple. To That lo, he must go pick another. Were Fun ah, passe, I'm loving all he'd do. 29Jun17a
Shall we now quibble over grammar is it? and challenge putting the name of those first flowers in proper caps? sigh Or wait...that was then [please note date of sonnet] and this is now.
JennyGordon
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51/F/Bolingbrook, IL
Jul 12, 2017
Jul 12, 2017 at 7:53 PM UTC
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