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Sugar is bad for you, especially, saccharine maple thoughts that you cannot afford due to the hazard of overweight ego dense with the aftertaste of adipose fantasies clogging the arterial bonds that tether you to solid ground Stop the caramelized madness from carbohydrating your soul into victim obesity causing the full arrest of your spirit The sweet is guilty, distorted in mirrors, a negative image of a past feeling, present reflection born of the collision of intentions and consequences
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Jul 4, 2017
Jul 4, 2017 at 7:46 AM UTC
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Sugar is bad for you, especially, saccharine maple thoughts that you cannot afford due to the hazard of overweight ego dense with the aftertaste of adipose fantasies clogging the arterial bonds that tether you to solid ground Stop the caramelized madness from carbohydrating your soul into victim obesity causing the full arrest of your spirit The sweet is guilty, distorted in mirrors, a negative image of a past feeling, present reflection born of the collision of intentions and consequences
Not a part 2 of "Note to Self"; even though the first lines are the same.
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Jul 4, 2017
Jul 4, 2017 at 7:46 AM UTC
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