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Inspired by Devan Ducasse, fellow HP writer "You're upset, I can tell, You know I'll never hurt you, right? Just stop crying." He says And I stopped crying. "I hate always fighting with you, It's my fault babe, Why don't you just apologize." He says And I apologized. "We need to stop having *** I want to focus on you, Take off your clothes, bad girl." He says And I let him take off my clothes. "We spend too much time on our phones, I'm sorry I don't make you a priority, It's nothing babe, get off my case." He says And I believed him. "I need to do more for you, Would you like red or pink roses, Go buy your own **** flowers." He says And I did. "I'm going out with the guys, I promise to stay out of trouble, I'm not drunk, ***** He says And I didn't say a word. "I should compliment you more, You're the most beautiful girl in the world, Wow, that chick has to be a model." He says And I didn't state my opinion. "I can be your shoulder to cry on, What's wrong with my baby girl, I swear I'm listening." He says But I know he isn't. "I love you for your heart, Your personality is what caught my eye, Your body is mine." He says And I didn't disagree. "I want to give you the world, You do so much for me darling, You're so selfish." He says And I tried harder. "I hate my family, You're the only one who understands me, I will never let you help me." He says And he never did. "You never give up on me, I know I'm really hard on you, How could you just stop trying." He says But I never did stop. "Please don't ever leave me, I couldn't do life without you, Just leave." He says. And so I did. "I made a huge mistake, I need you in my life, If you love me, come back." He says And so I walked away.
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Jun 23, 2017
Jun 23, 2017 at 11:34 PM UTC
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Inspired by Devan Ducasse, fellow HP writer "You're upset, I can tell, You know I'll never hurt you, right? Just stop crying." He says And I stopped crying. "I hate always fighting with you, It's my fault babe, Why don't you just apologize." He says And I apologized. "We need to stop having *** I want to focus on you, Take off your clothes, bad girl." He says And I let him take off my clothes. "We spend too much time on our phones, I'm sorry I don't make you a priority, It's nothing babe, get off my case." He says And I believed him. "I need to do more for you, Would you like red or pink roses, Go buy your own **** flowers." He says And I did. "I'm going out with the guys, I promise to stay out of trouble, I'm not drunk, ***** He says And I didn't say a word. "I should compliment you more, You're the most beautiful girl in the world, Wow, that chick has to be a model." He says And I didn't state my opinion. "I can be your shoulder to cry on, What's wrong with my baby girl, I swear I'm listening." He says But I know he isn't. "I love you for your heart, Your personality is what caught my eye, Your body is mine." He says And I didn't disagree. "I want to give you the world, You do so much for me darling, You're so selfish." He says And I tried harder. "I hate my family, You're the only one who understands me, I will never let you help me." He says And he never did. "You never give up on me, I know I'm really hard on you, How could you just stop trying." He says But I never did stop. "Please don't ever leave me, I couldn't do life without you, Just leave." He says. And so I did. "I made a huge mistake, I need you in my life, If you love me, come back." He says And so I walked away.
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Jun 23, 2017
Jun 23, 2017 at 11:34 PM UTC
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