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I saw a man on the bus today, he looked like your sort. Dark skin with darker hair and very fine prominent cheekbones, with just enough beard to look scruff but smart. Ah, to be scruff but smart, dapper, suave and rough. As he brushes a tuft of his hair behind his left ear I smile to myself creepily. I'm not afraid to admit I was thinking about how I could write all this. Then about why I thought that he'd tickle your fancy. I guess I didn't really. I suppose I took to my own liking and assumed he'd look good next to you somehow. I can't say I know why. Though I believe a straight man is entitled to an opinion in this case. The same way a woman might talk about how their waitress had stunning eyes or wonderful hair that shines without being even the slightest bit greasy.
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Jun 21, 2017
Jun 21, 2017 at 10:54 AM UTC
Perceptive Passenger
I saw a man on the bus today, he looked like your sort. Dark skin with darker hair and very fine prominent cheekbones, with just enough beard to look scruff but smart. Ah, to be scruff but smart, dapper, suave and rough. As he brushes a tuft of his hair behind his left ear I smile to myself creepily. I'm not afraid to admit I was thinking about how I could write all this. Then about why I thought that he'd tickle your fancy. I guess I didn't really. I suppose I took to my own liking and assumed he'd look good next to you somehow. I can't say I know why. Though I believe a straight man is entitled to an opinion in this case. The same way a woman might talk about how their waitress had stunning eyes or wonderful hair that shines without being even the slightest bit greasy.
finley-pietersen
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Jun 21, 2017
Jun 21, 2017 at 10:54 AM UTC
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